Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


A beautiful, sad piano melody
plays through my head,
getting louder and louder
as it progresses and
more and more lovely.

There is a forest,
very dense and foggy.

There are only dark greys,
greens, and blue-greens, all blending.

There is movement.
I am running.

But it isn't me.
She hardly looks like me.

She is much more beautiful.
She is running and crying.

It is unclear whether
she is searching or escaping.

I can hear her pitiful sobs
over the music only barely.
She is glowing.

I am in my room,
but then I am on my back,
in the forest.

I thrash and claw at everything
like an animal.

I am tearing my skin off,
but there is more underneath.

I scream and cry as my eyes bulge
and I begin to sweat.
I have to break free!

There is something else beneath me,
but no one can see it.

I am trying to find it,
but even I allude myself.

The music is drowning me out now
as I begin to fade.

Am I a ghost?
I am translucent.
And then I am gone.

I am back in my room again;
the music is fading.

I plead to go back to the forest.
It is where I belong.

But the music does not listen.
It plays quieter and into silence.

And with the piano,
I too am gone.
:iconvanillaknight:

Author's Comments

These emotions were tearing through me the other night.
It was so strange.
I was so sad and angry.
All because of these images in my head.
I am not human.
I am something else.
But I cannot find myself.
Not even in my forest.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconsyaoranflame:
Wow, it's really intense and makes you want to read faster and faster! Great job. : )

--
"Of all the things I've lost, I miss my mind the most. " ~Mark Twain"
:iconvanillaknight:
Thank you so much! C:

--
"Two women with whips...That's my cue to shut up and act like a good boy..." ~ Phoenix Wright

If Link told me to jump off a mountaintop, I'd be on Mount Everest in no time. owo

Hablo un poco de espanol. :3


ಠ^ಠ
:icondingomutt:
Gorgeous poem. <3
Whenever I'm struck with these strange emotions I start typing... And it ends up being a RP post for one of my less than sane characters.
And I come back later and I read it and I sound like I've lost my mind. xD
Again, lovely poem. C:


--
For the millionth time, I didn't steal the kid. e__e'
:iconvanillaknight:
Thank you so much.
I need to remember to always have a notepad and -working- pencil by my bed, because when I do, shit like this flies out. Yay! : D

--
"Two women with whips...That's my cue to shut up and act like a good boy..." ~ Phoenix Wright

If Link told me to jump off a mountaintop, I'd be on Mount Everest in no time. owo

Hablo un poco de espanol. :3


ಠ^ಠ
:iconoukamiyoukai45:
Wow so intense i can never write like that. When i try to write poems they come out really odd with no meaning or story.
:iconvanillaknight:
Hah, thanks. And the funny thing is was that I was simply scribbling down emotions when I wrote this a few days before. Am I one weird human being or what? o3o

--
"Two women with whips...That's my cue to shut up and act like a good boy..." ~ Phoenix Wright

If Link told me to jump off a mountaintop, I'd be on Mount Everest in no time. owo

Hablo un poco de espanol. :3


ಠ^ಠ
:iconoh-my-stars:
That is a great poem. You captured a lot of emotion in it and kept my attention through the whole piece! :D I agree with the first comment too. It makes you want to read faster and faster. I think it's because how it gets more intense as you read along. VERY nice work! :D :+favlove:

--
:star: :bulletpurple: :star: :bulletpurple: :star: :bulletpurple: :star: :bulletpurple: :star:
:iconvanillaknight:
Thank you very very much! Gosh, I'm so surprised by the reactions I've gotten by this, I'm not going to lie. :blush:

--
"Two women with whips...That's my cue to shut up and act like a good boy..." ~ Phoenix Wright

If Link told me to jump off a mountaintop, I'd be on Mount Everest in no time. owo

Hablo un poco de espanol. :3


ಠ^ಠ
:iconoukamiyoukai45:
really?
If i just wrote down emotions i would have to call the poem emotional bomb

Details

June 28
1.6 KB

Statistics

15
2 [who?]
26 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Site Map